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| A smoke jumper is a firefighter who parachutes into a remote area to combat wildfires. |
I liked how you showed the video before you guys started talking because I was able to understand more of what you were talking about. as well as picture what was going on.
ReplyDeleteI thought the presentation as a whole was very well done. They understood the material to a point where they didn't need to read off of a screen or note card. I was confused at what exactly Smokejumpers did at the beginning, but the video they presented was very helpful. I also enjoyed the snacks they provided to symbolize how they do their job.
ReplyDeleteGreat cool information given. I thought you guys presented it great and had me interested the whole time , I thought the snacks were great ! Maybe one thing to critique is more on the conclusion, I saw great main points and intro but not a super strong conclusion. You guys both set a a very high standard for everyone else and you guys went first ! Great job on the presentation:)
ReplyDeleteI like how well you guys could describe to us the job, it was very detailed. However, I think you guys could have made it a little more guided, it was not completely all over the place or anything, but sometimes it was hard to follow.
ReplyDeletewonderful job presenting! switching between each other, talking back and forth in intervals was very well executed. lots of good information was presented, I have had some fire fighting training and much of the main information was touched on (that I can remember).
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of your presentation was how information packed it was. The video you showed really helped emphasize what the career is about. You guy's really went above and beyond.
ReplyDeleteVery, very good presentation. I enjoyed the snacks, not only because they were good but because of the symbolism and the meaning behind them. I also liked the fun fact. You guys definitely seemed like you knew what were talking about.
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation, I thought you two presented equally and did a great job describing the job. I feel like you did great research and knew what you were talking about. One thing that you could possibly work on is polishing up the conclusion. Great job!
ReplyDeleteBest presentation of the day. Great research and a lot covered in 7 min. I could tell you practiced before class and it shows. Great quote as well, very motivational. The video being ready and in a good point to get your point across was a good marker, yet we always need transitional markers to lead the audience into the next key point. I need work on this as well. thanks for going first, now I have a background to shape Jacob and my work.
ReplyDeleteI loved this presentation. You guys clearly know your stuff and you guys did a great job presenting the information. I think you guys could had showed a little more on the tools that these smoke jumpers use, but other than that great job!
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